Writer's Blocks
I call this entry "Writer's Blocks," plural, because in my experience, there are many reasons I can get stuck, and many different approaches to getting unblocked. Below are some reasons for getting stuck, and approaches I've tried, which may or may not work for anyone else.
I can't write that scene/story because:
It's too boring. It IS boring. I think I need this scene, but do I really? Does anyone care that the heroine ate dinner in between the rainstorm and the fight with her husband?
Approach: Only write the interesting parts. Those are the only parts anyone will want to read, after all.
I don't know what comes next. The story runs up against a blank wall. The character has to make a choice, and I don't know what he chooses. Or, one character says something, and I don't know how the other character responds.
Approaches: Try what-ifs. What if it happens this way; what if it happens that way? Write the possibilties. Ask the characters what they want, what they're driving toward.
It's too embarrassing. I would die if anyone I knew read this. What would they think? How can I write about nose-picking/self-gratification/bulimia/ whatever?
Approach: Write it. You don't have to show it to anyone; just write it. You can worry about other people later.
Nobody will want to read this. My writing is too old-fashioned/esoteric/poetic/cute/edgy/w hatever.
Approach: Write what you really, truly, with all your heart and soul, want to write. Styles and trends change all the time.
I don't want anyone I know to read this. What will my mother/boyfriend/editor/daughter/wife/ne ighbor think of me? They'll think I'm mean/self-involved/geeky. They'll think that I hate my mother, embezzle from my job, or cheat on my wife, just because my characters do. Person X will think Character A is based on her.
Approach: See approach for "It's too embarrassing."
I'm scared. This scene/topic cuts too close to the bone.
Approach: Writing is supposed to cut close to the bone. Take a deep breath. Write it. Get emotional support if you need to.
I don't really know these characters/this setting. I don't know what these people want. I can't picture where they are.
Approaches: Do character sketches. Explore the setting with all five senses.
I don't really know this place/this time. I have no idea what people would wear or say in ancient Egypt/19th-century Poland/1950s Brooklyn.
Approach: Research.
Sometimes, the problems seem more global:
I can't write anything at all. My mind is empty.
Possibility #1: I have just finished a big writing project, and I am exhausted.
Approach #1: Rest a bit. Let the well refill.
Possibility #2: I'm really being blocked by one of the other reasons: I'm scared, or bored, or censoring myself, etc.
I know this story isn't working, but I don't know how to fix it. I've tried this, I've tried that, and nothing works.
Approach: Identify the conflict. If you can't, that may be a clue. What do the characters want? If you don't know, that may be a clue. Listen to the story. Where does it need to go? If you can't hear it yet, set it aside and work on something else.
I might add, that last one is what I do when all else fails: set the troublesome piece aside and work on something else for a while.
I can't write that scene/story because:
It's too boring. It IS boring. I think I need this scene, but do I really? Does anyone care that the heroine ate dinner in between the rainstorm and the fight with her husband?
Approach: Only write the interesting parts. Those are the only parts anyone will want to read, after all.
I don't know what comes next. The story runs up against a blank wall. The character has to make a choice, and I don't know what he chooses. Or, one character says something, and I don't know how the other character responds.
Approaches: Try what-ifs. What if it happens this way; what if it happens that way? Write the possibilties. Ask the characters what they want, what they're driving toward.
It's too embarrassing. I would die if anyone I knew read this. What would they think? How can I write about nose-picking/self-gratification/bulimia/
Approach: Write it. You don't have to show it to anyone; just write it. You can worry about other people later.
Nobody will want to read this. My writing is too old-fashioned/esoteric/poetic/cute/edgy/w
Approach: Write what you really, truly, with all your heart and soul, want to write. Styles and trends change all the time.
I don't want anyone I know to read this. What will my mother/boyfriend/editor/daughter/wife/ne
Approach: See approach for "It's too embarrassing."
I'm scared. This scene/topic cuts too close to the bone.
Approach: Writing is supposed to cut close to the bone. Take a deep breath. Write it. Get emotional support if you need to.
I don't really know these characters/this setting. I don't know what these people want. I can't picture where they are.
Approaches: Do character sketches. Explore the setting with all five senses.
I don't really know this place/this time. I have no idea what people would wear or say in ancient Egypt/19th-century Poland/1950s Brooklyn.
Approach: Research.
Sometimes, the problems seem more global:
I can't write anything at all. My mind is empty.
Possibility #1: I have just finished a big writing project, and I am exhausted.
Approach #1: Rest a bit. Let the well refill.
Possibility #2: I'm really being blocked by one of the other reasons: I'm scared, or bored, or censoring myself, etc.
I know this story isn't working, but I don't know how to fix it. I've tried this, I've tried that, and nothing works.
Approach: Identify the conflict. If you can't, that may be a clue. What do the characters want? If you don't know, that may be a clue. Listen to the story. Where does it need to go? If you can't hear it yet, set it aside and work on something else.
I might add, that last one is what I do when all else fails: set the troublesome piece aside and work on something else for a while.
And these are great tips. You should totally try to sell this as a column to the SCBWI magazine.
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